Sunset in the Desert

[Kevin]

I am having trouble starting a second theme. I am happy with the opening and was wondering if anyone could help me in my quest?

Here is the score, it is in Sib 5:-

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[wizzarts]

hello Kevin,

you have created a wonderful atmosphere. IMPO I would say it is a bit too short. When painting a picture of a dessert you will need a hudge canvas and large brushstrokes.

Your 2nd theme? Hmmm, why not starting some experiments with this scale:

Eb - Fb - G - Ab - Bb - Cb - D - Eb

It would give it an oriental touch.

I have fooled around with your file but figured out it would be too much Cap in there. I created an ongoing rhythm-carpet with a melody in halfs.

But it suposed to be your thing. You have started with a very sensitive description of a red fireball called sun.

I can do something to give you an idea what I would do. the better way would be to print out a picture of a dessert (windows wallbaper), place it in front of your piano and start playing with the scale mentioned above.

3ndy

[Kevin]

Piano, what piano?!

I know it is short, I am hoping it is just the beginning of a longer piece. I will check out that scale though.

Please spill your idea Andy!

[wizzarts]

In my imagination I see you sitting at the piano writing all your beautiful music with a very expencive pen.... hope you don't mind

Well, I will use your score to add some ideas - only rough things... please give me a day or two...

[Kevin]

What are you on Andy?!?!


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[wizzarts]

Sorry Kevin, maybe a bit too much Barnaby...